A Kenyan student has taken time to go through the letter of Ghana’s president on the death of ex-president Jerry John Rawlings.
According to the Kenyan user who uses the name @JKNjenga, death is inevitable and these times, people get very sensitive so we should be mindful of choice of words.
He therefore marked the whole grammar and gave other words which could have been used by the current Akufo Addo, instead of what he used. He also marked the whole letter and graded it 5/10.
Check out the photos here.
Dear President Nana Akufo-Addo (@NAkufoAddo)
My students and I condole with Ghana.
We have, therefore, used your statement, on the death of Jerry Rawlings, for today's marking project.
Here is how it looks after surgery.
Have a great day.
Mwalimu Joshua Njenga pic.twitter.com/o7F8nujTVM
— Mwalimu Joshua Njenga (@JKNjenga) November 13, 2020